Hitchhiking
Rucksacks on their shoulders, wearing sneakers, jeans and flannel shirts,
they lost themselves in contemplating the sunset for a while. Are you tired? Asked Brian turning to his girlfriend. She shook
her head and smiled at him. She didn't want to tell him that her feet hurt. The sneakers
she wore weren't much comfortable. Brian turned round and looked at the street to see if a
car was coming along by any chance. The road was empty. Not a soul was in sight. The narrow asphalt ribbon was a clean cut
through the landscape. It slipped between yellow cornfields and green little woods like a
long track of black ink. The night was
falling down and there were no streetlamps along the road. The darkness was about to
swallow everything in one mouthful. Did you hear something? asked Tracy. That's
exactly the kind of questions you shouldn't ask when the sun is going down, Brian
thought. Did you hear something? Why, there was something to listen to? The
bogeyman spying on them from behind that bush and unintentionally breaking a dry branch?
Nonsense. Okay,
he said. Let's go back to work. Brian's jaunty thumb sprang out of his right
fist and there it began to sway a little. Stretching for hitchhikers. Brian made as if to
polish it on his shirt, and then he stretched out his arm. The only effect his exaggerated
mime had was to cheer up Tracy. The road was disappearing. In a few minutes they would
have to take out the flashlight to light up their way. Streetlamps
are not only useful, thought
Brian. They're also (and that would be the important
thing right now) reassuring. No
car will come our way, Brian, said Tracy. I really think... and there
she stopped to look over his shoulder. Brian turned round and saw shining eyes. But they
weren't real eyes, they were just the lights of a ramshackle old pick-up truck with
pistons in a total shambles under the scraped paint of its bonnet. It was going at full
speed, as noisy as a caterpillar, eating up miles of empty road, running towards them. Brian
and Tracy cast a worried glance at each other in the twilight. Up to then they had thumbed
many lifts easily, but that pick-up truck made them inexplicably nervous. Brian noticed
that it kept too much to the right. He began to have a suspicion it was getting ready to
run them over. He stepped backwards when it became clear that the insane driver was in the
mood for nasty jokes. The dusty light of the pick-up truck lighted up the boy and the girl
for just a second. Tracy screamed with fright. The vehicle sped past them, almost touching
their sneakers, and then it skidded dangerously to move back to the roadway. Abruptly, it
braked, renting the silence with the deafening noise of the old brakes trying to carry out
their job. Finally it stopped, its exhaust pipe letting out a grayish smoke and the engine
grumbling for the cruel treatment. You
fucking idiot! screamed Brian as he walked in the middle of the road, his fists
clenched, his eyes full of anger. Are you drunk? Tracy
followed him, scared to death, and grabbed his arm, searching for protection. Are
you okay? Brian asked her. The girl nodded and got closer to him. The
door of the pick-up truck was flung open. A tall and stately shadow got out. Brian and
Tracy couldn't help shivering with fear. They couldn't see his eyes, but they knew the
stranger was looking at them. It was a hateful look, they were sure about that, as much as
they were sure that the person staring silently at them wasn't completely sane. Get
on, said the shadow without a face, making them jump with fright at the sound of his
voice. No accent, no intonation. An order given by a murky, hollow voice. And soon the
shadow was back into the cab. I
don't like that man, Tracy whispered. He
nearly run us over, said Brian. The very least he can do is to give us a
lift, said Brian. Let
him go away, please. Just
a lift to the next town, insisted Brian. I've had enough of walking. He
gently seized Tracy by the arm and together they walked to the pick-up truck. In the
middle of the loading platform there was a black oilskin wrapping something bulky. Tracy
and Brian got on and put down their rucksacks. Brian tried to peep inside the cab, but the
pane was so dirty he gave up at once. He was slightly scared, but the thought of keep on
walking scared him more. As the pick-up truck began to move he was determined to keep a
sharp lookout, and surely keep an eye on the strange oilskin wobbling in the middle of the
box. What's
beneath that thing? Tracy asked. I
don't know, answered Brian. Maybe his tools. He must be a farmer. He
reached out a hand and touched the oilskin. His forefinger sank into something soft.
No, I was wrong. I think the man is a hunter. You
mean that's a dead animal? moaned Tracy. A
deer or a fox, who knows. For
the umpteenth time the pick-up truck bumped. The oilskin slipped away, revealing the cargo
of the alleged hunter. It wasn't a deer and it wasn't a fox. Deer and foxes don't have
hands. Tracy
screamed with terror. All of a sudden the vehicle braked. A bloodcurdling cry came out of
the cab. An animal wild cry, but nevertheless human. Brian and Tracy jumped off the
pick-up truck and plunged into the wood, running among the trees, eyes full of terror.
Brian was squeezing convulsively Tracy's hand, listening to the footsteps of the murderer
running after them. Help!
Help us! shouted Tracy even though she knew they were completely alone. She heard
him right behind her, and she could even smell his fetid breath. The
monster snarled and let out a kind of ravenous bark. Tracy heard his fangs snapping shut
and realized he was too fast for their legs. She was grabbed by the shirt. Her hand was
snatched from Brian's. She fell down, landing on fern and pine needles, inhaling a strong
smell of resin. At that very moment she knew she was about to die. Brian!
Help me! she screamed at the top of her voice. Through the vegetation she saw Brian
turning round, goggling, as pale as a ghost. He couldn't see her, but he could see the creature. In
the twilight the beast rose to his unbelievable full height. He had long monkey-like arms
and big hands fitted with monstrous claws. Underneath his hirsute brow two yellow cat's
eyes were shining. The horrible muzzle of a werewolf opened and showed white sharp teeth.
He was the bogeyman. The main character of all childrens nightmares. Brian
looked at him falling on Tracy and thrusting his claws in the tender skin of her back. The
girl let out a cry of terrible pain and began to writhe to try and escape his hold. Then
the monster sank his fangs into her throat and she stopped screaming. Brian
watched motionless, shocked, incapable of reacting. The cruel cat's eyes were shining,
half-opened in the ecstasy of blood and murder. He got rid of the corpse by throwing it
aside like an empty can. His snout was now a mask of blood. When he made as if to move
towards him, Brian turned round and began to run. Help
me! Help me! he screamed at the silent wood. Only the crickets and the rustle of the
trees moving in the breeze answered him. Brian ran, his lungs going up in flames, his eyes
full of tears and pain and terror, the muscles of his legs stiffened by the sudden strain
to which they were submitted after several hours of walking. Behind him the creature was
gaining ground, grunting like a bear and hissing like a snake. Brian
was already resigned to his death when he stumbled and began to tumble down a crag. The
fall seemed to go on for ages as he tried in vain to brake the tumble by getting a grip on
surfacing rocks and roots. He scratched his
hands, was wounded in the right knee by a huge stone, received a violent slap in the face
from the stinging frond of a pine, and finally banged his head against the mossy trunk of
a big fir. His fall ended there, at the back of that tree, where he fainted. In
a minute or two I'll be dead,
he thought before surrendering to the night. But nothing happened. I'm
still alive... he whispered. He got up and coughed, grimacing with pain. He was
covered with bruises and scratches, dirty with earth and resin, and felt chilly and
confused. But the memory came back to him after a short time later. No,
no, it's not true. It can't be true, he moaned, shaking his head. He looked around
him and began to call out loud the name of his girlfriend. No answer. He called louder and
louder and louder, until he ended up screaming like a raving mad. He frantically began
climbing the slope, panting and moaning all the way up. When he reached the spot where he
had lost his balance he paused for a moment to get his breath back. The silence of the
wood, the quietness of the nature. Nothing else. Tracy wasn't there. Please,
God, help me
he whispered, trying not to burst out sobbing. He raised his
head, addressing his plea to the blue sky he could just see through the branches of the
trees. He had to go back to the place where the creature had caught Tracy. He was sure she
was okay. Ought to be. She was simply lying on the ground, somewhere not far away,
sleeping serenely in the grass, safe and sound. He didn't ask for more. He
began to walk. He couldn't help shivering at the thought of that monster hiding somewhere,
waiting for him to come along. He kept looking about, trying to pick out a clue to guide
him towards Tracy. Finally
he saw her. She was lying on her stomach on the carpet of pine needles, lifeless, her face
sunk into a bunch of seedlings of yellow primroses. Her blood had spattered the delicate
petals of the flowers. Brian
closed his eyes and stepped back. He didn't have the courage to touch her and he couldn't
move away either. A sound in the vegetation made him turn round abruptly. The sound
repeated. Brian began to run without looking back. He stopped only when his sneakers
touched the asphalt of the road. Anguish was suffocating him, and terror didn't allow him
to think rationally. He lifted his head and started back in fear. The
pick-up truck was still there with the engine switched off. He got closer with due
caution. He craned his neck and peeped first inside the box and then inside the cab. Back
to the box. The corpse was still there, wrapped in the black oilskin. The fabric, put back
in its place by the wind, now covered the poor mortal remains again. Further on there were
two rucksacks. The red one was Tracy's. Bewildered,
Brian looked at it for a long time. Then he looked at the wood. Then his eyes shifted
again on the rucksack. He was about to go insane. He was sure about that. Tracy was still
screaming in his head, calling out for help. He couldn't save her. Now she was dead.
Nothing left but some yellow flowers stained with blood. Brian
fell to his knees and burst into tears, giving vent to his desperation. All his energy and
courage had gone lost through the night. He didn't have the strength to keep on walking.
But he had to get away from there, so he forced himself to get inside the cab. The cloth
of the seats had been slashed, vomiting most of the stuffing on the floor. The key was
inserted, ready to start up the engine. His lucky
star had finally decided to help him. Still crying, he took the wheel and turned the key.
Stepping on the accelerator, he wondered if there was still some gas left. There was.
Brian drove slowly, sitting stiffly behind the wheel like a robot, distraught with fear
and grief. His life was over. That was it. He lifted his eyes to look into the rearview
mirror to check the road. At that very moment the oilskin in the box moved. At
first he just kept stepping on the accelerator. He realized he couldn't stop doing that
even though he knew it was useless. The oilskin slid down, exposing the muzzle of the
creature snarling savagely and baring his teeth and scratching the pane with his claws. My
God! My God! screamed Brian. STOOOP!
shouted an angry voice off screen. Damn it, I can see the zipper of your costume! I
can see the damned zipper of that bloody costume! The
pick-up truck braked. The horrid monster turned to the movie camera. What? The
zipper? Where? asked a stifled voice from under the latex mask. The
zipper of your costume! repeated the director. "Am I speaking Greek? It was
supposed to be covered by some mud! Why the hell the mud is not there? Does anybody can
give me an answer? Can anybody tell me why we'll have to film the scene once again? Even
though we're shooting a damned second-rate horror movie I'd really like you to offer to
collaborate a little, if you don't mind! Costumier! Make-up! Here we go again! From the
beginning! |
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